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Writing Flying High
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I wrote this poem awhile back for a Legend of Zelda poetry event on another forum. I'm still new to the poem-writing business, so I'm sorry if this isn't very good. But I hope you enjoy it anyways!

Flying High

Above the fields of Hyrule
Flies Zelda on her lavender unicorn
With her golden hair flowing in the breeze
And her unicorn's tail gently navigating behind.

Her crystal blue eyes, perpetually alert and loving,
Survey her vast land below
As she gazes fondly on the kingdom
Her father entrusted to her care.

Zelda's heart swells with pride
As she continues her journey
And sees her people happy and working hard
And the landscape lush with new spring grass.

As long as she lives, Zelda vows,
She will do all she can to protect her lovely land.
And with her faithful unicorn perpetually by her side,
She will be able to do just that.
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I liked it :) !

Have you written much other poetry before?
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Cool! We need more poetry around here.
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(10-04-2019, 09:41 PM)Dust Bowl Wrote: Cool! We need more poetry around here.

Indeed, we could use some more... just as long as I'm not the one writing it, because then it's going to suck :( .
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(10-04-2019, 09:29 PM)Kyng Wrote: I liked it :) !

Have you written much other poetry before?

No, actually. That was one of my first attempts ever. Maybe I'll try to write more poems just for fun. They may not be great, but I'll try my best.
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(10-04-2019, 10:09 PM)Kyng Wrote:
(10-04-2019, 09:41 PM)Dust Bowl Wrote: Cool! We need more poetry around here.

Indeed, we could use some more... just as long as I'm not the one writing it, because then it's going to suck :( .

Dude, don't be so hard on yourself. No-one sucks if their heart and passion are involved.

Besides, look at all your projects. You are the creative type :)
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Kyng, you may not feel that poetry is your strong point, but I think you definitely have a gift for being creative. Just look at this community you've built, the wide variety of topics to discuss and forum games to play, and the themes you have come up with. I wish I were half as creative as you, and I wouldn't mind reading any poem you might write someday.
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(10-04-2019, 11:23 PM)Dust Bowl Wrote:
(10-04-2019, 10:09 PM)Kyng Wrote:
(10-04-2019, 09:41 PM)Dust Bowl Wrote: Cool! We need more poetry around here.

Indeed, we could use some more... just as long as I'm not the one writing it, because then it's going to suck :( .

Dude, don't be so hard on yourself. No-one sucks if their heart and passion are involved.

Besides, look at all your projects. You are the creative type :)

(10-05-2019, 06:55 PM)HoeenHero Wrote: Kyng, you may not feel that poetry is your strong point, but I think you definitely have a gift for being creative. Just look at this community you've built, the wide variety of topics to discuss and forum games to play, and the themes you have come up with. I wish I were half as creative as you, and I wouldn't mind reading any poem you might write someday.

Thanks for the kind words, DB and Checkmate :D !

Maybe I'll give it a go some day, but until then, I'm happy to just read other people's poetry :) .
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