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Writing My Own Works
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I myself am a longtime writer. I mostly write teen fiction or a mix of thriller/horror type stuff. I seldom write romance due to a bad past in seeing for myself how much it can take over a plot in a story. Anyway, here is a new one I am working on. It is in spoiler tags for space reasons. 


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That's it for part one. I will post more in a day or two. Hope you enjoy it. Yes, it is turning more romance but that's okay this time. Thanks for reading this. 
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Previously in our story....


Amy, who had been in a online friendship with a guy only known as HeartofGold asks her for a meet face to face at the playground. Amy is stunned by this but does agree to go along with it.

Amy's brother, Steve suggests going with her, but she refuses trusting her gut on the meet being safe. He does leave the offer open in case she gets into trouble.

The next morning, Amy is quick to get ready and then abruptly leaves, knowing her father and brother both have to work until late that night.

She is shocked to learn her penpal is none other than her brother's best friend, Jacen. The two develop a friendship as they spend the day together, but by the end of the day it begins to deepen.

Jacen takes her home just in time to discover Amy's father and brother are already home, but something is wrong.


Quote: Amy was quick to ask, "What's going on? You both usually work late on weekends."

"I received a message from Steve's doctor asking me to call him as soon as possible. I did the minute I got home which was two hours ago." Her father went on to explain then. "Amy, your brother has a irreversible heart condition. They said he only has a few months left to live."

All  of the color seemed to leave her face just then and she fell back on the couch. Her eyes immediately closed as her world went dark. 




And now, here is chapter 2(part 2) of Test of Friendship.




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To Be Continued.....
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Yeah, I definitely agree with you on the whole 'romance' thing: unless it's specifically a romantic story, it's tough to balance it with the other elements of the work. Some of my RPGs have romances in them, and while those are fun, they often end up taking over the entire RPG, at the expense of the other elements of it -_- !

Anyway, this is great so far. I'm looking forward to seeing more of it :) !
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Thank you so much! 


Continuing on.....

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Sorry for splitting part 2. I had a slight case of writer's block. This came to me rather quickly this evening. I will work on part 3 tomorrow.
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Hey Guys! I do apologize for not updating this story sooner. A lot has been going on between my washer breaking down and getting sick a few times due to high blood sugar. Diabetes sucks! Anyway, here is chapter 3!



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The conclusion of chapter 3.

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And now....chapter 4.



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My next one is a backstory type of thing. It is another original story and no its not a short story. Its in the POV of the main character in it.


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This is just the opening. I am still writing this. More still to come!
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